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I think that this is amazing. It's very in depth and expresses strong emotion and feeling that a reader could relate too while going through any emotion. I think you did a fabulous job. My favorite line in the poem is, "All time and all space,
Exist at once, in one place." This is my favorite because my religious beliefs come in to play here. It's a very well written poem, and I just want to let you know that this is phenomenal writing. As my beliefs come in, I can definitely relate to the "narrator" of this poem, and it's also a great explanation of the world we live in, if you take the time to look beyond what we think we see.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
1 out of 1 deviants thought this was fair.


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